A life filled with regrets.
Once he realized his faults and decided to lead a new life, it was too late.
His family was already gone.
He had borne through each day with pure rage.
Finally at the end of his misery, his wish reached the heavens—an unforgiven one.
He goes against fate to raise his sword.



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I'm unsure about the accuracy, but it's mostly comprehensible. However, there are noticeable issues that might irk readers. Strongly suggest the translator hires a proofreader or editor for a better reading experience.
Here are some examples:
- Inconsistencies in character names, such as Logan, Rogan, Padric, Patrick, Dwayne, and Dwain within the same context.
- Potential chapter breaks, where it seems to end abruptly, sometimes in the middle of a word.
- Unpredicted shifts in point of view, alternating between third and first person perspectives occasionally.
- One chapter appears to be a summary rather than a narrative progression.
- Confusing pronoun usage, where the wrong character's pronoun is used (e.g., using "her" when it should be "he").
Please address these points for a smoother reading experience.
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